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Excavation
Contributed by
faith_my_eyes
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Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 04:27:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Time and circumstance can bring a temporary burial
To all the dreams our heart harbors
To the wishes once deeply felt…
But it can never hide the remains…
That which was not tossed aside as mere rubbish…
Through memories and desires my mind digs
In discovery of places long ignored…
To confiscate artifacts of a bygone era
Longing to displayed… and to have the debris brushed off
And be treasured again…
Oh, to hope again!
Despite eras and events…
Those relics have not been forgotten…
Some things are better left unsaid…
Buried will this remain.
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faith_my_eyes
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2006-08-20 16:27:28]
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Re: Excavation
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by melancholy on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 05:22:48 PM AEST
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wow that's awesome
keep up the great work =] |
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Re: Excavation
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 05:51:02 PM AEST
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Dearest Emily,
It is fabulous to see your work posted on here again. I have missed it a lot.
It's easy to think I know what's going on with this, but as I found out, there is more to it than meets the eye.
I like how this almost rushes, how each line seems eager to lead on to the next. The poem works well and really flows.
Now... we just gotta get some more reads up, people are missing out.
Good write hun,
Love,
Phyllis xxx |
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Re: Excavation
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by Oneir8dude on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 04:05:46 PM AEST
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This is very beautifully written...
Right now at this moment, I feel it is about me..
I am remembering things right now that i wish still
was...
Thank you my friend... very nice words...
Bill |
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