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Lustful Longing...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 04:11:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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My heavenly goddess
Lying so close to me…
I feel the heat rise from you
Pulling me towards your radiance
This lustful longing to hold thee
Overwhelms my being
It makes me weak in your presence…
I need to be engulfed in your river of love
Pull me deep inside of you
Needing to be as one with you
Wrapped in your sheets of skin
Touch me…
Caress me…
Make me feel alive..
Give me shivers throughout my soul
Make me tremble as you and I collide…
Teach me all your wishes
Tell me of your desires
Let me be the one to make you sigh
Give me a chance to please thee
And to fulfill your every want
To slide upon your surface
And delve into your soul
To stroke your sensuality
To make you want us more…
I beg of thee to glance my way
See this longing in my eyes
To please you…
And only you…
My goddess I worship thee
I’ll do anything for you
You are my soul’s desire…
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2006-08-20 16:11:34]
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Re: Lustful Longing...
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 04:32:04 PM AEST
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Dang, holder!!!... you stuffed a whole lotta passion in this piece!!! This has got to be one of my favorite pieces by you (if not the favorite).
You got my attention with the author's note on this and held it straight through. It feels as though these words must have poured straight out of some essential part of your core. Nicely done, friend... a very notable piece.
~Snemmy
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Re: Lustful Longing...
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 09:35:37 PM AEST
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hot hot hot
this is fire...... |
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Re: Lustful Longing...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 07:22:13 PM AEST
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That last line is the embodiment of a sweet and profound love.
This was truly lovely holder ..
a gorgeous declaration of love and passion. It's wonderful that
you have found this. : ) Hold onto it.
~Breezy |
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Re: Lustful Longing...
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:03:27 PM AEST
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Awww, this was sweet. A very lovely write that is deserving of much praise. I loved it!
*rose rose *standing ovation* rose rose* |
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