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An Addiction
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 08:08:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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That old friend who remembers my name,
Shoots through my veins, burning cocaine,
The sea spray’s a froth, paint it on thick,
Like the magician, thinking of the next trick,
The needles point, a silver star,
Caught in the web of sky,
No distance is ever too far,
Go on, give it a try,
Float on your sea of reason,
I’ll stick with ecstasy,
There really isn’t anything left,
In this bitter old world for me,
The reason for this addiction?
I suppose it is unknown,
But in this room of a thousand people;
I’m completely on my own.
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Ruby2sdy
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2006-08-20 08:08:28]
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Re: An Addiction
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by PHISHBATES on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 09:36:09 AM AEST
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| This was a very real write. I related to it. Maybe I should say I relate to your friend; ) all in all thanks |
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Re: An Addiction
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 11:54:28 AM AEST
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good flow
well done |
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Re: An Addiction
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 03:02:33 AM AEST
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| Really sad, hope your friend can find the strength to beat it, great poem. xxx |
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Re: An Addiction
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by alasdaircairns on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 05:37:28 PM AEST
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Sorry to keep quoting you Rube but "The sea spray's froth, paint it on sick" is sublime genius. Such visual use of our beautiful language. Love it. x
PS Hope your bud is ok. |
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Re: An Addiction
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by alasdaircairns on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 05:38:41 PM AEST
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| Oops I meant thick not sick! I guess you worked that out as it's your poem. All these typos-think I'm working too many hours... |
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