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Trying To Die..
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 06:20:31 AM in AEST
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Today I tried to kill myself, jumped off the out side ledge,
closed my eyes as I jumped. landed safely in a hedge,
then I thought I'll stab myself, for a sharp knife I did hunt,
when I tried to stab my self the flippin knife was blunt,
then I took and over dose it just made me feel quite ill,
I wonder what it was I took, it was quite a big pill,
before I had taken them, should of read the label,
they were suppositories... for piles... prescribed for aunty mabel,
Then I tried to hang my self from the rafters of the house,
the rope broke, in the loft been chewed, by a little mouse,
went to the train track jumped onto the track,
forgot there was a train strike, just nearly broke my back,
So now iv'e given up, the message is quite clear,
if I cannot kill myself must be meant to stay here,
why did I try to do it, must be going mad,
I love my life, it never worked so now im really glad....
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lillyjane
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2006-08-20 06:20:31]
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Re: Trying To Die..
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 11:46:38 AM AEST
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| I agree that killing yourself is never the answer. Life is a really hard journey, perhaps harder for some than it is for others, but still not a completely golden road for any of us. Our trials, and tribulations are our stories to tell. To live and to survive is victory. I enjoyed your poem. |
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Re: Trying To Die..
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 12:17:27 AM AEST
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Very good writing as always.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Trying To Die..
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 02:29:50 AM AEST
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| ah the irony..... |
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Re: Trying To Die..
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by Manda2 on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 05:08:10 PM AEST
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| This is so funny Lilyjane, I love your humour! A masterpiece! |
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Re: Trying To Die..
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 12:03:21 AM AEST
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gotta love it when someone can twist as morbid a topic as suicide into something funny. great work.
--talli
PS: and thanks for the comment. |
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