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Contridicting
Contributed by
Kimberlynn
on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 01:09:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Why can't I stand out
Why can't I just be
Couldn't I be popular
Couldn't I just be me
I love all of me
I hate myself
I want to show personality
I'm acting like a zombie
Sometimes I feel like a punk
Sometimes I am a priss
I am an optismist
I would like to die
I don't think I can do this
I know I'll fly
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Kimberlynn
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2006-08-20 01:09:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Contridicting
(User Rating: 1 ) by FORDIE on
Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 02:47:35 PM AEST (User
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I see what you were ging for, but it didn't work in my opinion. I think being ironic would've been better than contradicting, at least that would make more sense. I think contradicting yourself in much of it didn't really work, even though I know that's what you were going for. |
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