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Dark and Empty Nothing
Contributed by
mesano
on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 07:29:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The darkness rushing over me,
Like a blanket of deceit,
Shivering and angry,
In my cold and lonely seat.
Wishing life was painless,
Free of hurt and fears,
It leaves no other option,
Bloodrops are my tears.
Crying in my silent way,
To torture no one sees,
Praying, hoping, waiting,
But I'm forever on my knees.
Will this never end?
How much longer can I last?
Running from my future,
While I'm haunted by my past.
I stare into a mirror,
But nothing do I see,
That dark and empty nothing,
Is what's become of me.
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mesano
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2006-08-19 19:29:29]
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Re: Dark and Empty Nothing
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by frmpoison2static on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 07:33:08 PM AEST
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| wow...loved it...it is what i am going through... |
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Re: Dark and Empty Nothing
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 07:33:19 PM AEST
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nicely done! I always love dark poetry and this is great!
Will this never end?
How much longer can I last?
Running from my future,
While I'm haunted by my past
this conveys the feelings pefectly. A++++
good job! |
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Re: Dark and Empty Nothing
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 12:11:45 AM AEST
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sucks when you can relate to dark poetry. good work on this one though, easy to understand though interesing to interpret. great write.
--talli |
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Re: Dark and Empty Nothing
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by mercedes on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 05:21:36 PM AEST
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| So simple yet perfectly conveyed. |
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Re: Dark and Empty Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 07:27:27 PM AEST
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An excellent composition!!
Second last stanza is incredible!! I understand the
anxieties and anguish laden throughout the piece and you
expressed it explicity. Wonderful post ..
~Breezy |
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