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Forgive Me
Contributed by
rockstarr12747
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Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 07:14:25 PM in AEST
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I've said I'm sorry so many times
With words I've never used
So now its time to use my ryme
And make you unconfused
I was wrong I know this now
And I need You near
I miss the way you showed me how
You loved me oh so dear
Now I have only your smell
And a heart of broken tears
And still I really can not tell
Why you leave me here
I've forgiven you so many times
I dont care to count
Because all I cared was you were mine
And not about the amount
And yet you leave me here today
When I've only been wrong once
And still I linger for the day
That I feel your touch
Please forgive me I messed up
Like so many do
I allowed me feelings to take one
And I feel I've lost you
I still love you with my every being
And I know you still do too
So dont forget about me
Because you know that I love you.
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rockstarr12747
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Re: Forgive Me
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 07:28:18 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem. your words are so easy to read and yet so emotional.
I still love you with my every being
And I know you still do too
So dont forget about me
Because you know that I love you.
i can completely relate with these lines this is exactly how i feel at this point in my life with the one I love. A++++ GREAT write! |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by Mesano on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 07:31:11 PM AEST
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| such a sweet poem.. |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 11:53:21 PM AEST
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hmm
such a sweet flow |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by ellimac on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 02:11:31 AM AEST
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| i can relate to this poem. good job |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by angelrae on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:23:58 PM AEST
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| A beautiful poem about forgiveness. I know we all can relate to your poem. To forgive someone is surely a blessing , to receive forgiveness is also a blessing. I hope that everything turned out ok for you. Your words are so wonderful in this poem. |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 11:49:52 PM AEST
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WHAT WORDS CAN'T SAY YOUR HEART SHALL EXPLAIN,LOVE NEEDS NO NAME WHEN IT COMES TO PAIN,ALWAYS LOOK UP WHEN YOU FEEL YOU DON'T HAVE MUCH,BECAUSE WITH A LITTLE LUCK & ALOT OF TOUCH...YOU CAN SHARE A LIFE WITH A 4-EVER LOVE! GREAT POEM-I HOPE YOU GET HIS 4-GIVENESS!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 06:06:50 PM AEST
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| I can tell that you really care about your fiance. good poem. |
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