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not fair
Contributed by
beautifulplague
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Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 01:22:18 PM in AEST
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i thought you were the one
but i was soo wrong
you proved it yourself
thanx but it was too late
i already fell for you
you should have shown me sooner
here we are now
your whole
im ripped apart
because you knew all this would happen from the start
its not fair
i wasnt prepaired
now im the fool
cause i fell inlove with you
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2006-08-19 13:22:18]
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Re: not fair
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 01:52:41 PM AEST
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| well, it's just the way of life..love hurts sometimes..and you expressed it well. |
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Re: not fair
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by Drapes on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 08:54:47 AM AEST
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Ahh... I know just how you feel right now.
But it will get better...I'm hoping.
Good write and I wish the best for you!
-Drapes |
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