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Alone?
Contributed by
melancholy
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Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 09:07:41 AM in AEST
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So i feel a bit lonely,
so i feel a bit scared.
reasons given without answers
everything goes unprepared.
feels lethally quiet when you're gone.
i sit in my mid and try to clear the world
sweat so cold, i feel the need to run
away, and gone, so quiet in dark shadows,
so mourning in morning lights
so, im here now, free to roam.
to be or not to be alone?
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Re: Alone?
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by PHISHBATES on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 10:28:22 AM AEST
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| Nice write. I write because I like the way it empties my thoughts, kind of takes me out of the now. |
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Re: Alone?
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by melancholy on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 12:32:44 PM AEST
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thank you, dear
means a lot =] |
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Re: Alone?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 02:43:03 PM AEST
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Oh, I see a whole collection of emotion within this!!
lethally quiet .. I LOVE that!!
This is a very emotive piece, and a wonderful first post!!
~Breezy |
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Re: Alone?
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 02:47:21 PM AEST
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that's really good for a first post, my first one sucked. love the way you sorta let everything out, to be or not to be alone? great.
--talli |
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Re: Alone?
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 12:07:49 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Alone?
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by melancholy on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 05:26:10 PM AEST
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Thank you guys,
you dont know how much it means |
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Re: Alone?
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by suze on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 08:58:46 PM AEST
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wonderful short piece.
i love it, alot.
well done, well done my friend
continue writing.
if anything does come from the heart, it is poetry.
-sue. |
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