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I Don't Deserve You
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I know I don't deserve you
That much is painfully true
I'm just an ugly accident
And you are perfect, a masterpiece
Every tear that slips out
I cry because I can't have you
I cry because of my own non-confidence
I just want to hold you
I just want to hold you
In my arms
When you are feeling sad
Is that to much to ask?
I guess so since I haven't yet
I know your answer
And I can't live with the depression
Or thoughts of suicide anymore
Maybe I'll 'fall' on a knife
Or cut myself 'shaving'
And what a terrible tragedy it shall be
'I have nothing to lose'
My friends say, I smile and nod
While thinking except you and my life
I hate being raped of my confidence
The tears perched ready to plummet
And all the while I ask the same ***** question
Why can't I be different?
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Re: I Don't Deserve You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 06:15:50 AM AEST
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Hey Joel, sad write... I could do without the 3rd verse tho...
Jenni |
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Re: I Don't Deserve You
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by M on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 11:33:13 AM AEST
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| Ah, Joel. this is a very good poem, i really like it. it is so sad, but so good. |
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Re: I Don't Deserve You
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 09:50:16 PM AEST
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| deep thoughts...i like this lots:) |
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Re: I Don't Deserve You
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by psyonara on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 06:06:38 AM AEST
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| Good poem, but very sad. Sumtimes felt like that too, but maybe without the third stanza as well. I think the 2nd stanza is brilliant though. Keep at it! :+> |
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Re: I Don't Deserve You
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by karoody on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 09:52:01 PM AEST
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don't drop any stanzas, for it is what you thought...i just hope you don't feel like that...very well written work...and if you can pull these words from your heart, then you are good enough...take care.
your friend,
kara |
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Re: I Don't Deserve You
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 04:16:30 PM AEST
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oh this is so beautiful...
'and all the while i ask myself the same ******* question
why can't i be different?'
this is truly beautiful...i'm so sorry...i'll always be here... |
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