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Metaphor
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 10:56:00 PM in AEST
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If I must die then earth
Is inarticulate to sing my dirge
The sorrow of a murmur-laden wave
If where I make my final birth
Sea-born winds complianing neath the sky
And round my head
The water's silver ring
For I am KING but only of a kingdom gone by
And If I must live and feel
The ashes of oblivion about my soul
Let life be fearful let life be whole
Despair but face the sunrise
And if I grieve let it be about the blistering sun
Till death or when I die
Billy
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Re: Metaphor
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 12:14:03 AM AEST
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hmm very interesting write
I like it alot
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Re: Metaphor
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 01:14:52 PM AEST
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Well I think you are a king nomatter what!
This is beautiful once again Billy you have evoked alot of emotion within your write. I so love your work.
Michelle |
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Re: Metaphor
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 04:42:13 PM AEST
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Billy .. there is a depth here that I feel not
many can reach .. (myself included)
Do you ever have a mediocre thought or
musing? I may need you to explain this
one to me .. :P though .. the way in which this
was written, (as is true with all your writes)
stirs a provocation of thought and
wonderment in me.
I can say this .. the first stanza is outstanding!
ever and always ..
~Breezy |
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Re: Metaphor
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by wizard on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 11:51:15 AM AEST
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another great one bro!!
wiz |
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Re: Metaphor
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:51:19 PM AEST
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My dear friend the thoughts and feelings that you make your reader feel are undescribable.
I'm sorry for I feel that I just don't have the right words to give your masterpiece all the credit that it deserves. I humbly bow before you my dear poetic king~
as always your fan~
sue m |
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