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Silence Roars
Contributed by
ButterflyInThorns
on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 02:09:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Silence roars
Screaming in my ears
But I’m the only one that’s listening
I’m the only one that hears
All the things I long to say
Welling up inside
Words I dare not utter
Pain I strive to hide
This silence is not empty
In fact it’s like a quilt
That’s smothering me, I’m suffocating
Choking on my guilt
Silence roars
It grips my mind like steel
My unspoken words of pain and hurt
The loneliness I feel
My words try to escape
Through tightly sealed lips
But I’ll hide these words in shadow
A perpetual eclipse
My silence once roared.
My silence was ignored.
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ButterflyInThorns
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2006-08-18 14:09:42]
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Re: Silence Roars
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by freespirit on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 08:57:05 PM AEST
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Hi I realy liked what you have written
job well done keep up the good work
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Re: Silence Roars
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 12:17:28 AM AEST
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i loved how it flowed perfectly, though it had metaphors, it was easy to understand, and unfortunatly to relate to. fantastic job.
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Re: Silence Roars
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 02:16:56 AM AEST
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Good heartfelt write. I liked the piece. Touching. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Silence Roars
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 06:12:18 PM AEST
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God, this hits hard. This piece feels sooo heavy. You really did an excellent job of getting this on the page. This, in my opinion, is the sort of thing that is so impossibly hard to express. I swear sometimes I feel like I would practically vomit words onto the page if I were brave enough to allow it - but I'm not (not always). Yeh... i found something relatable here... and because I did, I'm so entirely impressed with your ability to get this out and to share it here. I imagine it was a difficult write. But you did - you certainly did do well.
And... welcome to YPDC, by the way!
Keep writing,
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Re: Silence Roars
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by spaceotter on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 03:57:32 PM AEST
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| nice! the silence that breaks only the sufferers ears |
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