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do you remember....me
Contributed by
evolon
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Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 07:33:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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the bitter salts of tears
Leaves a memory on my face.
the bitterness we once had
leaves my mouth with bitter taste
i hate your Gutz!
I love you so much
i dont wanna see you
and i ache for yur touch
is love when seasons change
and the persistant pain remains
How do i show the beauty of my love
when others see my hearts, pain
im trying to seperate my mind from you
its just the emptieness is killing me now that we are apart
there is no soothing note in this orchestra of dismay
the tulips,lavender, roses and daiseys have all wilted away
i stand in your shadows reaching every day
to touch, love, kiss,hold you one more night as we lay.
time heals all wounds? how could that be?
All my time spent wondering how to get you back to me.
do you think of me? do you in the least feel the same
or has time passing made you change?
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Re: do you remember....me
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by wizard on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 09:11:26 AM AEST
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very enjoyable...nicely done!
wiz |
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Re: do you remember....me
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by Autumns_kiss on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 05:01:49 PM AEST
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| Dude nice job. The imagery was so detailed i really related to the poem. But then... who can't right haha gj |
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Re: do you remember....me
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by Oneir8dude on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 10:52:18 PM AEST
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evolon, Nice write....
They are not worth all that pain.... But you
can not have good poetry with out great pain...
Thank You for sharing this... |
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Re: do you remember....me
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by MiZzUnDaZtOoD on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 01:27:48 AM AEST
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| this is nice.. |
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Re: do you remember....me
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 11:56:37 AM AEST
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| This was excellent. I loved everything about it. I could feel every word you wrote, and it was painful. If I wasn't so numb, I would've cried. Great write poet. |
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