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SHIELD of AMOR
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 04:33:00 AM in AEST
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You’re a control freak, yet full of fear and oh so week,
Big a boisterous, almost monstrous, a shield so thick
You have welded, hiding away from what’s real, not allowing yourself to feel, anger instead is what you store, and not believing
what could be, to scared to allow me in, even though I know I’m
There, don’t live your life in this iron shield, you think it protects you and keeps you safe, but I still lye and wait, your so strong,
Much stronger then me, for I come on bended knee, ready to
Sing and dance and spread my wings, no fear have I. to take a chance, to feel once more, to dance that dance.
As you shut me out, I’m still within, through all your anger
You put on me, the lashing of words you shout at me,
Your strength is more then I could ever be, you have been
The strong one, full of pride, baby, just remember, I have heard you cry. I remember long ago when you weren’t afraid to dance with me, back before things got rough and life took it’s toll, age is setting in , feel it again, let it sting, its not to late, take off that armor plate, you’ve built so thick, I don’t play games, it’s not a trick,
Trust me, what I feel is true, and it has always belonged to you.
Don’t shield your heart from me, no armor to lock me out, trust me to hold your heart, know without a doubt, I will never lock you out.
So unlock the locks that hold you back from wanting me, set your heart free to love me.
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Re: SHIELD of AMOR
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by jerseysue on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 12:31:10 PM AEST
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| This has some good lines in it. You have almost written this in story form. Mind you I am great lover of verses, so don't take offence to that. Its full of angst, but also a hope for future times. Good work. Sue x |
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Re: SHIELD of AMOR
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by suze on
Friday, 2nd January 2009 @ 10:00:25 PM AEST
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| i love it ! very heartfelt, and beautiful. the words flow together like silk, i can tell you put time into it, brava =) |
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Re: SHIELD of AMOR
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 05:52:35 AM AEST
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Okay...i have read all your poems and without doubt, THIS is your best one by far. Please...i mean no offence, but you need to turn the editing feature on so that the mods can help with some basic spelling errors (like WEEK instead of WEAK). These spelling errors and punctuation errors detract from what you are trying to say....which is a damn shame as you have such powerful messages.
On a more personal note...i would love to see you try writing a funny, happy poem.
Looking forward to reading more of your offerings in the future.
Cheers hon, John. |
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