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my heart is still walking
Contributed by
ramatie
on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 03:34:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your grip on my hand so tight i dont want to fight it
Slowly and genuinely my heart is untangled from its brokeness,so be it
We are walking,im staggering to match your step,im making it
The traffic lights are red so you stretch your neck to touch my lips with yours,i like it
I strectch my hand to touch your tender chicks but alas,i hit on the head lamp besides my bed
I thought i were sleeping, so fake was it!
Im mourning , my hand is in pain,
My heart also yearns for its sleep
So I realise my body was sleeping yet the feet of my heart are swollen
Once again,my heart has been walking in my dreams
Unfruitful is the walk to try and reach you
Will i make it?
Copyright ©
ramatie
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2006-08-18 03:34:26]
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Re: my heart is still walking
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by emystar on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 03:52:55 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: my heart is still walking
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by longhaircg on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 05:00:51 AM AEST
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I liked it, alot
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