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take's all kinds
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 07:31:49 PM in AEST
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slumber mist a folly of ferns laughing at my greet
walking in this coloured picture green splatters at my feet
gentle wash from dirty nights slumber on the ground
this heavy rain brings images a million mirrors all around
wild in eyes i howl at the sky the beast in me so free
no placid moves just funk and grove seeing the true me
beat in mind no place for time just a burden that needs forget
in this my awakened tomb i have my trap just set
waiting for the small and weak just hunger for the soul
i come to you with words of glue it time to take my toll
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Re: take's all kinds
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 05:01:59 AM AEST
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| really brilliant its short but says a lot. xxxx |
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Re: take's all kinds
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by brew on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 09:17:09 PM AEST
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Wow Regan, glad to see a post, and took near the heart........It made it seen it was short, and straight on......
again glad to see ya back........
Brew~ |
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Re: take's all kinds
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 02:36:15 AM AEST
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Good to see you, my friend. Excellent, excellent write here. So many lines in here that captured me ....like this one:
"this heavy rain brings images a million mirrors all around"
Nice man, really lovely image there.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: take's all kinds
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by Benjina on
Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 04:48:17 AM AEST
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| Flowed absolutely beautifully. Keep it up. |
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Re: take's all kinds
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by kismetkills on
Thursday, 5th February 2009 @ 12:31:51 AM AEST
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| i like how you say "green splatters at my feet," because i never really thought of grass that way. good job on the poem. |
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