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Tis Your Beauty
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 06:01:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Fair one thy presence doth shame the flowers,
And maidens held in ivory towers
For thine eyes are like the sky so blue,
Tis the beauty that I see in you,
Your lips the colour of reddest wine,
Moist and sweet, they taste divine,
Thy kisses passionate like flaming fire,
Tis the beauty in you that I desire,
Thine skin so soft and so full of feeling,
Sends my senses wild, my mind a reeling,
Your loving caresses I crave so much,
Tis the beauty I feel, in your loving touch,
Your voice like velvet ,smooth and svelte,
Brings a tingle to me, and my heart it doth melt,
Thy loving words leave me trembling and weak,
Tis the beauty I hear whenever you speak,
Your love is like the warmest summers day,
Filled with sunshine in every way,
No coldness I feel , you filleth my soul,
Tis your infinite beauty , that makes me whole.
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jerseysue
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2006-08-17 18:01:06]
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Re: Tis Your Beauty
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 06:14:59 PM AEST
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I like your sense, the style
your choice of words
It gives me a deep feeling of old
and nicely wrote
I concur
I witness the affection
You pore to the page
with no ink |
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Re: Tis Your Beauty
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 06:59:21 PM AEST
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Very well written Sue.. I have always found so much divinity in the "old world style"..
and that you relaxed the composition a bit, with a added element all your own, makes this not only unique, but a joy to read as well-
Very nice..
B |
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Re: Tis Your Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 09:45:30 PM AEST
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sue, what a splendid piece. I love the repetition of the
phrase, "tis the beauty" throughout. It brought about a certain
cohesiveness to this stunning write!
Lovely write, sue. The old English breathes a medieval ambience
into this that I find breathtaking .. especially that first stanza.
~Breezy |
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Re: Tis Your Beauty
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by emystar on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 02:48:28 AM AEST
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Awesome writing, my friend.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Tis Your Beauty
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 05:04:10 AM AEST
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| Truly beautiful Sue loved it. xxx |
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Re: Tis Your Beauty
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by SAND-WIND-GHOST-OF-SORROW on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 09:46:06 AM AEST
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| its very beutiful i like it,i can learn many thins of this poem one of them is the sence of word how to choose them and how to make pll feel them thank u for shareing it has been fun..bye ^^ |
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Re: Tis Your Beauty
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 12:50:17 PM AEST
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Ah, how lovely Sue! This brought a vision that was not at all unlike Sandy's Hopelessly Devoted To You moment in Grease (*wink*) but is set considerably further back in time. Ah, mooning... 'tis such a lovely way to spend one's time, no?
Wonderfully written and beautifully conveyed. Well done!
~Snemmy |
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