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Out of the Incomplete Urge of being Whole (Page 2)

Contributed by rhei76 on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 05:51:11 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

I want to say I was at aw.
A very frightening thing.
Watching the design flow,
Like liquid fire.

Nothing was real,
And I was a part of nothing.

"A frightening stage,
Afraid of losing body
Not quite lossing ego
The affliction of rational thought
in the stream that
Noticably contained everything"

[Page 3]

/*#@%$u*/

Uneducated,
Feeling life kills the soul

Unexcepting
To the social rule

Taking psylesibus
For colored strolls

I was tripping thru my world
At war between me & myself
Wondering in the winds of discontent

Unedited
To the loss of things

Unprepared
To look into the dream

Unfocused
When I walked upon the stream

I was tripping in the world
At aw with what I see
Wondering what this was

In the cool wind of absence
There is no words
No need
No place not to be

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2006-08-17 17:51:11]
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Re: Out of the Incomplete Urge of being Whole (Page 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 06:32:08 PM AEST
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This is quite deep.I sense a lack of confidence in ones self, written in words. Well maybe or maybe not. Anyway it may be abstract, but it is possible to read between the lines. Sue x

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