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Roll Call for America
Contributed by
Dot
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
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Our journey seems all too familiar of late;
Our road is tear-stained and worn.
The valley is dark, but alas, we must wait;
With emotions that are ragged and torn.
Great sadness engulfs us,
As the break of each day,
Unveils additional sorrow,
Our country is suffering;
Our hearts agonizing in prayer,
We are fearful of each new tomorrow.
Seven souls soared with angel's wings;
On that fateful day;
To heights above and beyond.
A voyage through the stars and portals unknown;
Breaking the human bond.
We say farewell to these loved ones;
Sadly, now but a memory.
Their mission is over;
their passage diverted;
From earth to eternity.
Can't you hear the rolling thunder;
Would you not agree;
God is demanding our attention;
America; He continues to keep us on our knees.
Copyright ©
Dot
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2003-02-12 01:00:00]
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Re: Roll Call for America
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 01:08:27 AM AEST
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people tend to turn their heads, don't understand...well delivered message.
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Re: Roll Call for America
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 01:32:05 AM AEST
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| wonderful write lovley message |
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Re: Roll Call for America
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 10:28:06 AM AEST
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| oh this is sooo beautiful! tears all over the place, thank you! your poetry digs deep within' me, stirs my soul, i cannot express this enough, i so don't want this war, *handing you a pen with infinite ink* much much love and huggs always nessa |
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Re: Roll Call for America
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 10:29:56 AM AEST
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so very true words on this subject,we do need to take note in all thats around!
~ Heaven Angel~ |
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Re: Roll Call for America
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 03:00:32 AM AEST
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As all things related to America I feel a need to speak out...
For starters this was very beautifully written. However some Americans tend to be blind to the fact how great their lives really are. Yes... your 6 astronauts along with 1 Israeli Astronaut died and yes there was the terror attacks. They are all horrible things, but its not like the world is caving in. A 1000 Iraqi children die every week because of the embargoes imposed on them because Hussein wont fall in line with the 'rules'.
What happened Sept 11th happens every day on a smaller scale in countries like Israel, Sudan, Ethiopia, Kosovo, Chechnya... the list goes on. Once again a great poem, but your people need to stop living in fear, stop focusing on the bad things and realize how blessed they really are... I hope u understand
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Roll Call for America
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by Dot on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 09:58:54 AM AEST
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| Thank you, Bobo for opening my eyes and ears. You are absolutely right. We do need to give thanks for our freedoms, and everything else we enjoy. I know that people and children in other countries are starving, abused, killed and other terrible. I'm so sorry for the children, and I ask God to protect and guard the little ones. I'll be more thankful from now on because of your words. Thanks. Dot |
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Re: Roll Call for America
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:38:47 AM AEST
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Aman you have have this soldier's attention, awsome write.
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Re: Roll Call for America
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 11:55:32 AM AEST
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I am against this WAR. It's not right for any soldier to have to go over to a foreign and die. It doesn't matter, we all can protest against this war and still not be heard. I don't think what President Bush is doing is right. I'm not trying to be a smart aleck, but I hope you understand what I'm trying to say. Although the people of Iraq need to be free from this war monger, we as a people shouldn't have to sacrifice the lives of others. This world should be at PEACE not WAR.
*S* Cynthia |
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