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Slow Girl
Contributed by
moldwarp
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Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 01:18:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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life comes at this girl
it takes a while for her to catch on
no.. she never really learns
opportunity only knocks once, or so they say
while she's in the bathroom readying herself
for her next, big break
Tonight, she thinks, Out Of All The Wrong Turns, One Must Be Right
but a note slipped under the door
with footsteps fading away reading...
"Well it was fun while it lasted. But I've got sh*t to do
Sincerley Yours, Opportunity"
she places the note on a pile
crammed with all the
"What If's"
"Could Have Been's"
and "Right Places but Wrong Time's"
flooded to the brim between
The Lost Loves and "If Only I Did This..."
No Worries, she smiles
I've Got Years, No Rush
I Smoked My Last Cigarette
And The 7-11 Is Just Around The Corner
Who Knows What I'll Find Next
Or What Will Find Me
Copyright ©
moldwarp
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2006-08-17 01:18:34]
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Re: Slow Girl
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by Devils-confused-daugther on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 04:34:37 AM AEST
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Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice :).. Gr8 work
l8ters. |
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Re: Slow Girl
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 12:48:04 AM AEST
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haha, this should be placed under "sarcastic poetry".....gotta love the bitter stuff. great write.
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