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Blood Red Tears
Contributed by
Drapes
on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 10:05:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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My crying wrists
Spell out your name.
Another contestant
In my twisted game.
The letters carved
Into this solid stone,
For everyday
I feel unknown.
Etched, engraved
In a sacred way,
For loving you
Every single day.
Each letter screams,
And says what I can't.
'Cause I'm silenced by you,
With a single glance.
Drowning in lava,
It burns to know,
You're the only reason
I've ever done so.
A burning desire,
Never even near.
Eased away
With blood red tears.
You're a part of me,
Though scars may fade.
I know for certain,
They'll always remain.
Now and forever,
I'll still push and shove.
'Cause I hate you so much
With all my love.
8.16.06
Another one about y o u.
Copyright ©
Drapes
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2006-08-16 22:05:14]
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Re: Blood Red Tears
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by drtylilsecret on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 10:48:12 PM AEST
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huh, interesting. i expected it to be really emo but...it wasn't. good write.
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Re: Blood Red Tears
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by chaos78 on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 10:59:29 PM AEST
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| i truly love this can relate to the feeling good job thank you for sharing |
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Re: Blood Red Tears
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by secretwind on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 08:23:17 PM AEST
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scars fade
but
the pain remains...
good flow. |
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Re: Blood Red Tears
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 08:58:19 PM AEST
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| I can't believe you write so beautifully. It's like your touching my soul...I'm blown away.. |
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Re: Blood Red Tears
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by Lilbabe on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 09:41:39 PM AEST
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love, love, love!! that was absolutely great! i liked how you said "my crying wrists" i havent heard that ond before and i love that
i have 'his' initials carved into my wrist...a part of me forever.
great write
lex |
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