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Crying for Love
Contributed by
HeArTbRoKEnGiRl
on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 09:23:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There’s two of me really
Both crowded inside
There’s the happy, joyful girl
Twined with the girl who constantly cries
She’s crying for love
She’s crying for the dreams she left behind
She’s cryin for the life she longs
She’s crying for the heavy black cloud cementing her mind
This happy girl sat at her side is to weary to intervene
Nowadays the dim light from her corner can rarely be seen
The years of warfare have left her fatigued and worn
She’s tired of fighting. The glittering smile has long since been gone
You might catch a glimpse - every now and then
Of the jovial ardor she still yields within
Her golden spirit is always there flickering in the dark
As she clings so tight to the love in her heart
But the tears her sister cries haunt her dreams
The constant wailing, tears flowing into streams
She’s crying even now
The hurt just won’t relent
What about her happy ending
The pages. They’re worn, torn and bent
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HeArTbRoKEnGiRl
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2006-08-16 21:23:47]
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Re: Crying for Love
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by SAND-WIND-GHOST-OF-SORROW on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 08:35:25 PM AEST
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well i maybe new here but i know when i see a great poem it shows how u really feel who u really are and how u act in life or it can show wat u want them to feel or wat u want them to know its words mixed with joy and sorrow and thats the beutiy of it ahhh ^^" soorrryy if my english is not really good .....am only have littel poems and i havent finished most of them XD but one u put your heart into makeing a poem thats the best poem for you. thank you for shareing this feel free to send me any old or new poems of yours bye
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Re: Crying for Love
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by Arcadia1 on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 11:33:22 PM AEST
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You expressed the pain so well.
Of course in you own way, to your own emotions.
I feel it.
Its quiet beautiful. |
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