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The Two
Contributed by
TundraHydra
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Did I do the right thing today or was it wrong
My actions replay themselves like a redundant song
I told them both at the same time
One tried to laugh it off the other contemplating feelings in her mind
They traded looks that mean more than a thousand words
I can read the pain that lies there and how much it hurts
I've tried to keep my feelings to myself alone
But watching this battle of fierce beauty looks is a shock
Staying silent I'm not sure how much of my feelings or pain I've shown
I can't stop the repercussions of my actions
I just hope I can comfort the warring factions
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2003-02-12 00:00:00]
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Re: The Two
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 01:42:21 AM AEST
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| you have a great talent keep it coming! |
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Re: The Two
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by Ivy on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 06:57:52 AM AEST
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