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Where is God??
Contributed by
DesiWalz
on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 06:20:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Where is God??
Life has changed
Since I was born,
For the better,
I don't know,
All I know is,
Something is wrong,
A friend age 15,
Has a baby age 2,
And my mother,
Never finished school,
A boy downtown,
Sells drugs for rent,
His age 10,
Religion,
Is like a felany,
Where is God now,
Is this pain all real,
Or is this a dream,
Look at that boy,
Dead on the floor,
Bullet to the head,
He killed his mom,
And now it turned,
The gun from her head,
To his own,
Girl on the corner,
Father of five,
One night stand,
Untrusting wives,
Rape and murder,
What has this world come to,
The terrorists,
Blew-up those buildings,
Fatherless child,
Husbandless mother,
All because of,
Bush's cover,
Newspaper headline,
BOY SHOOT'S UP THE SCHOOL,
Millions dead,
In this war,
Maybe even more,
Then before,
Suicide is like,
A drug to some,
How come,
Father beats mother,
Mother beats child,
Child beats teacher,
Then death has come,
Where is God now,
Why are we like we are,
Abortion took,
The life of her,
The child was here,
But mothers don't care,
Drunk at age 8,
Or was it date rape,
We all just play,
The blame game,
The court,
Says NO God,
Put hand on the bible,
This is a horrid world,
When one beliefe,
Losses to another,
There is NO God,
But yet there is,
Praying in school,
Is a lost passion,
Music is a thing of the past,
Now it teaches,
How to harass,
Teacher student affairs,
Father rapes only daughter,
Baby left out in the snow,
Lost its life,
No control,
Prostitution,
Drugs,
And alcohol,
Where is God,
Porn is found,
Inside schools,
Along with guns,
What fools,
Child taught,
Not to trust,
Eating disorders,
Look at her bones,
Threats made just in fun,
But turns out,
That we have to run,
For his lover,
He killed his wife,
And unborn child,
Where is God,
Is He gone,
Will He please come home,
So that I can raise a child,
Of my own,
WHERE IS GOD??
Copyright ©
DesiWalz
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2006-08-16 18:20:36]
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Re: Where is God??
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by flyineagle on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 06:26:05 PM AEST
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| yo you so totally rock des so keep on writing |
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Re: Where is God??
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by dougnut on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 06:36:04 PM AEST
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A very good write of all the pain and suffering in the world.
MANS INHUMANITY TO MAN.
Where is God You Ask?
He is all around us
Mother nature, Flowers, trees, animals, etc.
To stop this Inhumanity to man is down to us here on earth ( my opinion off course as a Christian)
and for us to put into practice what most religions teach
LOVE THY NEIGHBOR.
TREAT OTHERS AS YOU WOULD LIKE TO BE TREATED.
Your Poem has given us Food For Thought
I am hoping others will read this and take the time to respond with there opinions also.
God Bless you.
Doug.
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Re: Where is God??
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by SAND-WIND-GHOST-OF-SORROW on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 07:09:03 PM AEST
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first thing this is a great poem i only have small ones am new at this but ill tell u what i think .
u should keep on writeing and all poem s are apart of who were are and it says how we feel.
i understand how u feel in this poem but god has puttin us on earth to act and do whats right with out him interfering thats what i have learned in my past events if u read my poem u will know how i feel cuz i never chooze the right thing to do and now i have shamed my family....ahh sorry for this sad talk but i am called mr sorrow lol..
God bless you
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Re: Where is God??
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by circuslil on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 09:09:55 PM AEST
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g'day DesiWalz
you have captured so much of what is wrong with the world today..
greed and self-centredness and people not taking responsibility for their own actions has led to the decay of society
i really liked your poem and i will keep my eye out for any of your other poetry
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Re: Where is God??
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by chaos78 on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 11:21:10 PM AEST
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i really like the write where is god with all this chaos around i ask myself that a lot
thanks 4 sharing |
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Re: Where is God??
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 03:50:07 AM AEST
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| I believe in the devil to, in the bible it says God will let the devil go for a 1000 years and its for us to decide what path we take.. The devil causes suffering, not God.. I think God is there we have to need him and tell him.. I think your poem is brilliant well done.. xxx |
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Re: Where is God??
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by DesiWalz on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 03:02:06 PM AEST
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| I wrote this poem because I myself was in April raped and it helps. I am 14 and I live in a SMALL town! Peace DesiWalz |
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