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My Lover, this must end ( But!)
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 04:37:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Stolen kisses, Whispered lies,
Nights of passion we disguised,
As meetings,courses, visiting friends,
My lover, these sordid lies must end,
Entwined bodies in Motel rooms,
Snatched opportunities , gone too soon,
Skin on skin, heart to heart,
My lover, it is wrong, why did we start,
Knowing looks, teasing smiles,
Holding back, oh! how we tried,
But desire takes over, and wanton lust,
Maybe it's wrong,we know that, but!
Our probing fingers, bring forth desire,
Our kisses hot like flaming fire,
At passions height, we become one,
Adultery true, but still we go on,
This love we have ,is hard at times,
But it's no release for our guilty minds,
To lose each other would bring us sorrow,
My lover, we must part,Maybe! tomorrow?
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Re: My Lover, this must end ( But!)
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 11:14:17 PM AEST
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fictitious or not, it's words are bound in a sinful lust that I enjoyed.. very much but only 'here-and-now'.. lol
..very nice Sue~
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Re: My Lover, this must end ( But!)
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by Oneir8dude on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 09:41:41 AM AEST
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My lover, we must part,Maybe! tomorrow?
That made me smile.... Very good ending..
I like it, very good work Sue
I pictured it the entire lustful story, I caught it...
Nice work... I'll be reading yours..
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Re: My Lover, this must end ( But!)
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 11:57:43 AM AEST
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truly portrays the lack of respect that such suitors have for themselves and their words of promise. excellent read.
thanks for sharing... |
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