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Green
Contributed by
candysears
on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 11:27:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The color of green hurts
Your abilities…
You cannot see…
Your heart is spoiled
You are vain….
I think your heart sits
On a vacant lot…
Just beat every now
And than..
The color of green
Slashes your tongue
Rolls up and hide…
Behind the color of
Green….
It slither into blackness
Of the faded trees..
It lives in the oasis
Of the waste land of
Deceit.....
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2006-08-16 11:27:59]
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Re: Green
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 11:41:33 AM AEST
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'What a title!' said the thought to the mind
to the heart to the mouth to the memory creature
(is)
that same mind requires elaboration to extract the full
sensation from this poem. Gushingly good! |
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Re: Green
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 02:28:05 PM AEST
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| Really brilliant its short but says so much.. xxx |
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