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Phantom Rose
Contributed by
lord_sogi
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Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 12:37:29 AM in AEST
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Hauntingly red,
hues that of death.
Once it was blossomed,
but now of night
nothing seemed so less of life,
that as a hollow wind.
Tears have bled,
on the final breath,
that none could fathom.
That thought of everything alright,
seems so little trickling on a knife,
thoughts of nothing blend.
Life continues onto its sequel,
but not everything is so tranquil.
All that left behind,
becomes a horrid sublime.
From which only one thing grows,
the phantom rose.
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lord_sogi
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2006-08-16 00:37:29]
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Re: Phantom Rose
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 02:43:43 AM AEST
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| Thats so lovely, brilliant write. xxx |
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Re: Phantom Rose
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 10:48:03 AM AEST
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This is a very nice write..
Beautifully done...
Blessings.
C.S |
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Re: Phantom Rose
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by True on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 10:56:55 AM AEST
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| I love it. I had no idea that you were such a beautiful poet. Your stories are good but if all your poetry is like this then your poetry is better. |
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Re: Phantom Rose
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 02:06:06 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Phantom Rose
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 09:32:00 PM AEST
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another dark poem which is good
sometimes but i would love to see more of your talents in other types of poetry
this poem is good and i liked it too
just saying i know you have a briter side too |
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Re: Phantom Rose
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by TeRrahiel on
Wednesday, 27th May 2009 @ 10:14:16 AM AEST
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| Only one word is suitable for commenting this poem: AWESOME! |
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