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Mirror
Contributed by
kellycat
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Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 07:16:58 PM in AEST
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She looks in the mirror at a tear- stained face
She looks so sad, it's really too bad . She seems so out of place.
A million thoughts are running through her head
She's so witty, and so very pretty. Then why does she wish she were dead?
Life pulls her down and she loses all hope.
Will things ever get better ,or stay like this forever ?
She thinks this, and tries hard to cope.
She looks deep into the mirror and tries finally
To see into her soul, it's a massive black hole.
And as I sit here, I realize she's me.
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kellycat
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Re: Mirror
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by MsCrys on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 09:04:24 PM AEST
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| That's a heartbreaking poem and very well written. Good job. I hope you are feeling much better now :) |
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Re: Mirror
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 11:03:34 AM AEST
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Very sad reflections looking back at you. The mirror can only feed back to you what it recieves. So we need to find something more hopeful to place in front of it.
Well done on the write, andd Ii hope you are seeing a happier image in the mirror. The use of mirror is a powerful portrayal of your emotional state.
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Re: Mirror
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by shinji_kusa on
Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 02:49:32 PM AEST
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good poem, i wrote something similar to this called 'angels'. seems we have the same sunny disposition =P
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