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Last Day
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
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Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 10:47:14 AM in AEST
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Let me take you home
And place you softly in my bed
Let me hold you until tomorrow
Hold you like you have never been held
Let me accept
Some of the weight off of your burden
Talk to you with words, which have never been given
A touch of heaven
Let me relieve
Some of this tension that is bringing you down
Watch me hold you
In my arms as I stare at your smile
This is our last day together
This is our last walk together
Make me a part of your life
Even if the part is small
Make me important to your plans
A central figure in your love story
Let me kiss you on your lips
As your hand ruffles through my hair
Your hands on the back of my neck
Slowly sinking
Talk to me like you care about what I am thinking
Your thoughts are important to me
More important then my own
I miss you already
And you haven’t even left
Your still here
Still in my heart
You haven’t left
But you will
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2006-08-14 10:47:14]
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Re: Last Day
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 11:31:40 AM AEST
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| Great write. |
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Re: Last Day
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by frmpoison2static on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 05:16:48 PM AEST
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| your words make it seem very vivid and real...like i can feel the emotions that you are talking about...very good.. |
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Re: Last Day
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 11:04:03 PM AEST
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a very poignant and tender persuasion of thought, keeping love tight.
*****
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