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Secrets
Contributed by
ediii
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Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 07:37:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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So many secrets behind those eyes
Crying out loud what nobody can hear
So many feelings she lost ,she found
Her lips are sealed by one snowy tear.
So many secrets she wished they knew
So many lives she ruined by call
Longing to meet her crew
Too much of blowing snow she watched
Somany secrets she misses now
Colors are never too light to fade
She wants to stay good. But why? And how?
Decision to live in the past she made.
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ediii
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2006-08-14 07:37:27]
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Re: Secrets
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by Caged Soul on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 08:29:57 AM AEST
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| a sad tale of being entraped by one's situation, nicely written |
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Re: Secrets
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by ham323 on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 10:58:01 AM AEST
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| I can really relate to this poem. We all make little white lies and dont realize how much they might affect us in the future. We grow attached to our surroundings and forget what reality holds instore for us. Karma never skips anyone. But, the key is to learn from your mistakes, and not to relapse. Have better judgement the next time around or you might find yourself falling into a similar hole. |
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