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THAT GIRL
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 01:26:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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crying and weeping
she cries in a corner
that girl everyone sees
but dosnt actually know
she feels invisible
as she cries in her corner
thinks no one is watching
there is always someone watching
but do they really see?
do they know what she cries about?
do they really know how she feels?
she cries for no aparent reason
she cries for many things
she cries and dosnt know why
maybe its because of her thaughts
but her thaughts arnt hers
they are someone elses
somebody out there
ignoring their thaughts
and giving them to her
all she can do is cry
she can't fix them, there is no way
just thaughtless thaughts
piled up on her
and
she feels empty
she feels she has no purpose
no one notices her
she is just the girl everyone sees
but dosnt know
she wants to be noticed
she wants to be loved
because
she might one day
just give up
don't ignor these people
they want your help
they need your love
just notice them
what if it was you
the person longing to be loved
when you see one of these people
just stop and think
that
that lonely girl
in the darkest corner
crying, longing
slowly dieing
could be me
Copyright ©
The_Unknown
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2006-08-14 01:26:09]
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Re: THAT GIRL
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by dryice923 on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 01:30:31 AM AEST
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| wow. very sad, & deep |
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Re: THAT GIRL
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by emystar on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 01:40:01 AM AEST
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One can tell by this write that you think very deep and are full with compassion for others.
Good work my friend.
luv, huggs, hope,
emy |
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Re: THAT GIRL
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by frmpoison2static on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 07:30:17 PM AEST
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| its true, that people do need to pay more attention to others peoples feelings and emotions..good write. |
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Re: THAT GIRL
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by TheLostPuppet on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 01:46:30 PM AEST
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is that how you feel?
i know you really feel that way deep inside, but is that you? you are really a fun person. i see people like that every day, dont know what their thaughts are, dont know why they cry.
im sorry you feel like this, can i make it better? just tell me how, how can i make life better?
please, dont let go.
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Re: THAT GIRL
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by musicXisXlife on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 06:31:48 AM AEST
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Wow. That's deep. Seriously.
i love how it just ends like that..
pertay dang schweet. |
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