Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	22-November 09:03:39 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Ayattiwi Breakdown

Contributed by dryice923 on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 01:02:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Ayattiwi Breakdown pt.I

so now what am i going to do?
cry about the past
the past we never had
now i know it'll never be
you and me
never
but i dont know what i'll do
with out you
part of me died
inside
you're what kept me hangin' on
what'll i do now it's gone
gone, the hope of someday
why you say those things
you know
you know that hurt me
i'll never know
but now i guess we just cant even be friends
now i'm alone
alone in this world with nothing

Ayattwi Breakdown pt.II(Trapt)

trapt in my head
with nothing good
no sunshine
no way out of the grim darkness
no will to hold on to the edge
to keep from falling
de-deeper
and deeper down
no way out
thoughts of you were the candel
taht showed me how to unlock the door
& let myslef live
open'd the blinds
to see out the window
& see the light shining in
you've doused my candel
shattered my window
barred my door
now way out
now i got no way out
no way out of this darkness
no way out no way out no way out
no way out of this darkness
trapt, trapt, trapt,
with no way out of this darkness

Ayattwi Breakdown pt.3: "The End" Doenst Mean The End Of Pain (Broken)

first
of the last
rips at the heart
tender and tense
fresh wounds
tight in your chest
dont touch it
anything and everything
causes pain

the sting of the antispetisizing
words that need to be said
making everything come up
and hurt again
cant take it
twist it out
burst in a bloody mess

then it's left
battered beaten & broken
soft and weak
dont want to feel
washed wet blood
no scabs or scars to hide the pain
a faction of what it once was
can never love as much anymore

Copyright © dryice923 ... [ 2006-08-14 01:02:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Ayattiwi Breakdown (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 11:40:38 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

that was a pretty good write. I'm sorry you feel this way, hope everything gets better.
good write, keep it up.
luvs ya!
jess

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com