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Trapped Beneath The Depths Of Fear
Contributed by
-xhaleyx-
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Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 12:33:31 AM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Type over and over again,
The same words that describe what is real.
But these words will never begin,
to express the pain i feel.
Afraid of desertion,
Afraid of Deceit.
Controlling my mind,
Making me complete.
I own a self conscience,
and let things make a frown.
Knowing life has its ups,
But certainly has it's downs.
These words keep going,
writing themselves out.
But what its trying to say,
I don't know much about.
He's been gone to long,
I can't stand how she acts.
Love and friendships changing,
It's time to face some facts.
This life I live,
creates it's own events.
My family so far away,
Can add to this torment.
I'm still growing up,
And nothing's slowing down.
Stuck inside the walls of fear,
Is where I can be found.
What's going to happen,
once everyone has turned.
Turned their backs from one another,
And friends have finally learned.
When music loses it's groove,
And Poetry loses it's flow.
Wondering of all the things,
We loved and grew to know.
Will it be ok,
Once this comes to pass?
Or will it only get worse,
With more fingerprints left on glass.
I want no more lies.
I want no more sin.
I want to love, and live
My life safely within.
Within the box and faith,
And beneath the depths of fear.
With so many weaknesses
No wonder one strays from here.
A place with to much pain,
and one to many flaws,
A place where one can't think,
But drown with a cause.
How much longer,
Will this feeling last?
This feeling of hurt,
I once felt in the past.
Make it all stop.
Make it all go away.
I want to be happier,
And I want it today.
Copyright ©
-xhaleyx-
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2006-08-14 00:33:31]
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Re: Trapped Beneath The Depths Of Fear
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by The_Unknown on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 01:37:54 AM AEST
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xhaleyx I know what u mean. I have the exact same feeling. very well put. all the emotions and thaught have finaly been described in words. congratulations, u r the first, to discribe it to me in words.
I couldn't have described it better, thank you.
I enjoyed reading this and you finaly described the impossible. well done.
luvs ya!!!!
~*Jess*~
lol. ; ) good job. |
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Re: Trapped Beneath The Depths Of Fear
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by emystar on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 01:43:58 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
No one else could have done this better.
huggs,
emy
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Re: Trapped Beneath The Depths Of Fear
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by concealed_ardor on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 02:06:37 AM AEST
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| Excellent way of writing, I like it. |
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Re: Trapped Beneath The Depths Of Fear
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 01:24:36 PM AEST
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I think your write made a lot of sense. Your wrote this pretty well. I can relate to being "Trapped beneath the depths of fear."
A deep agony was felt with the read. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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