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Preliminary

Contributed by zeppchic420 on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 09:14:35 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



I fell in love with a perfect stranger, by the way

A breeze that should be salty
an image not at fault
I'm struck
I'm stagnant
wishing the tasteless breeze would carry me off
I'll float on the feather of a bird who doesn't know how good he has it
A mind that shakes and shifts too much to be uplifted will be my demise
I may seem to reveal to much
but in truth there are still so many surprises
some may make you hate me
others may get me what I need
But you'll never know

"and I will pretend I don't know of your sins until you're ready to confess
but all the time, all the time......"

will you pretend to know?
or pretend otherwise?

my patience would crush us if it were to gain tangibility
Lord know it already crushes me

Do you find the cosmos terrifying?
I do
But fear is the heart of love
And I fear you're never meant to keep your first

"when your eyes slink across me I get that feeling in my stomach of a girl with her new love
standing at the pier as he sees his old lover
Thery wave to eachother
and in that brief instant you know hell never stop missing her touch"

I'll never compare

I'm merely a child and you're just killing time before it kills me
at least I know you don't show because you're afraid of your own heart
and not of me
But isn't that the same thing?

I'm too paranoid for my own good
oh so patient
It'll soon drive me crazy
Ha, as if it hasn't already

All I ask is for your honesty
no matter how brutal it vould be

I'd rather you set me free than lead me on in a deadly dance
cause I took a chance with you I thought I would never have the courage to take
And i fear the doubts I expressed took the spark out of your kiss
I'm sorry
Simply sorry

But you were the first to break down this wall
and all you did was lay on top of me with that cold Aikido grip on my ass
with a look in your eyes that said

I'm sorry



I'm sorry



I'm a coward



YOU'RE not the one




YOU'RE not the one



YOU'RE not the one I need...



But this feels so damn good










Copyright © zeppchic420 ... [ 2006-08-13 21:14:35]
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Re: Preliminary (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 12:30:02 AM AEST
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I like the mischevious yet melancholic undercurrent to this. There are original thoughts here, and honests ones.

Sketching a little gesture of doubt in the air without taking my hand from my chin,

thanks for the read

larkspur


Re: Preliminary (User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 12:34:28 AM AEST
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Definitely not teenage poetry. Excellent write and i look forward to seeing more of your works in the future.

-Kevin


Re: Preliminary (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 01:32:00 AM AEST
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You are very talented. Jus let it flow.
huggs,
emy


Re: Preliminary (User Rating: 1 )
by kellycat on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 07:05:58 PM AEST
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awesome poem




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