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Just what we want.

Contributed by mindset on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 04:19:06 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Look in the mirror
What do you see
Inside a down voice screaming free
Been many places
Man seen so many places
Never been close only to realise
It's just upto me
Looked up so many times
Wished for them to make me free
They aint listenin
Just more bothered with him
Playin around makin no sound
I take a moment
To reflect and miss just this
Words of before haunting me
So much has changed
I dont know which way to turn
Been down looked all around
Thinking again too much frown
Inside before so much surround
Now feelin like an empty sound
Lookin at my hands so old
Worked hard made me realise
Time aint my friend
People walkin away
I aint suprised
Dont blame um
Im loosin the plot
What now been here before
So many movin away
Gettin on with all this
Thats slippin me away
Close my eyes wish a far away
Dreamin again
Back to a place i know well
They dont see
It's all slippin away......

Copyright © mindset ... [ 2006-08-13 16:19:06]
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Re: Just what we want. (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 07:13:38 PM AEST
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I like all of it.. feelin like an empty sound.. got me thinking..
good job.

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