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addiction
Contributed by
bigman
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Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 11:22:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Why does life pass me by yet death intrudes my soul
growing to hard to shake getting so old
Control is what it has yet reality i can't grab
happiness is hiding while anger is trapped
Addiction is my mind my soul and my death
a feeling of guilt with lifelong regrets
It flows thru my veins seeping destruction
lost into fear total body coruption
So dark so cold lifeless and deep
bringing my death on a one way street
I fold and i coward giving in to my thought
its to hard to concuer im walking its walk
This drug this demon this hell
if my life slips away tommorrow
wish my addiction well.
Copyright ©
bigman
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2006-08-13 11:22:24]
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Re: addiction
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by CaddishCut on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 01:21:22 PM AEST
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| The last two lines are remarkable. I could read them over and over. Brilliant write! |
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Re: addiction
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by frmpoison2static on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 04:23:15 PM AEST
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| excellent poem...i can relate. keep it up. |
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Re: addiction
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 02:33:59 PM AEST
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This is beautifully written...Sad in its own way..But very good..
God Bless!
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