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Melting Mentally
Contributed by
secretwind
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Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 01:25:07 AM in AEST
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Got a deep fascination
in strange sensations
I get up to fall down
bounce
round and round
like a confused clown
talk to myself
when no one's around.
I live in a tree
and swing
with monkees
have a secret fantasy
no one would believe,
I get the munchies
I eat
I sleep.
Everything is so digital
copies of copies
forgotten
what is original.
I stop
and ah
I pause
as I adjust to a new level....
cause
what was lost
was something quite simple,
I laugh a little
excersizng my dimples
giggle giggle wiggle wiggle
sometimes
I get so mental
when I am melting.
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Re: Melting Mentally
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 01:55:39 AM AEST
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He he, What have you been smoking?
Thanks for the smile,
larkspur. |
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Re: Melting Mentally
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 02:40:03 AM AEST
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Very cute dear friend.
Best be carefull where ya melt. U jist mite fo git the way back home.
Big smiles,
emy
I think I need to switch to your brand of smokes. |
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Re: Melting Mentally
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by Spike on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 03:23:51 AM AEST
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Very quirky and infectious, that bizarre topsoil covering a profound message about sameness and difference. If melting gets this creative, then I'm an ice cube, I'm an ice cube!!
Spike |
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Re: Melting Mentally
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by Shmokin on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 06:12:41 AM AEST
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| loved it,, excellent wimsey write, thanx for sharin :-) |
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Re: Melting Mentally
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 10:55:02 AM AEST
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Made me laugh..love it..
Love this bit.. xxxxx
I laugh a little
excersizng my dimples
giggle giggle wiggle wiggle
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Re: Melting Mentally
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by RLWildPassions on
Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 06:38:48 PM AEST
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| excellent way to explain the next level of growing... love this.. rl |
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