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my soul is
Contributed by
BSteel
on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 09:31:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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telekinesis, rock this thesis,
aliens designed western civilization,
not Jesus,
why do i speak this?
for my body is not my home,
and my soul is screaming under my skin,
raw instincts control my movements again,
desire burns in my chest like a deep whisky glass,
i yearn to expose all and call all to task,
my head is open and cracked,
yet communication remains intact,
trying to stay humble but blood burns,
like no other I've come to test,
I'm not what you'd expect,
my soul is
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2006-08-12 21:31:54]
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Re: my soul is
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 10:44:35 PM AEST
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Incredible strength-n-power in this write.
Call me nuts but sounds like your pens on fire!
Awesome.
hugs,
emy
Hang tuffffffffff! Kep up the amazingly powerful work. |
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Re: my soul is
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 01:26:45 AM AEST
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yes yes
A good flow
well done |
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