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Forget About Me
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 07:23:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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In my hand are dreams,
dreams of a better life and world.
In my hand are goals,
goals to make myself better.
In my hand is hope,
hope for a better tomorrow.
In my hand things come and things go,
lives move and life ends.
In my hand is an inspiration,
given by the Most High.
Gifts, goals, dreams, and abilities
all in my hand from Him.
And once in my hand was love.
Given to me in a unselfish way,
but given to a selfish person.
Love that once was strong,
is broken and gone.
Love that once could move mountains,
now cries out in the dark.
Maybe love was not meant to be,
maybe love is not meant for me.
Whatever the case is
I once had love.
Love once was with me,
now it stands in a burning field.
The flames rises high above the clouds,
and the smoke drowns out the stars and moon.
And love cries out from the heat and devastation.
One day that field may grow again,
one day love may come back to me,
and one day it can move that mountain once more.
Until that day, we will do our best to cope.
Until that day, we will be who we were made to be.
Until that day, forget about me.
Copyright ©
whiteleo1984
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2006-08-12 19:23:26]
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Re: Forget About Me
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 12:19:19 PM AEST
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| very moving poem. |
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Re: Forget About Me
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by Alison on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 09:58:00 PM AEST
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| i like the the words used in this write, very moving and very sad. good job. |
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Re: Forget About Me
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by one-curly-fry on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 04:15:53 AM AEST
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With this poem it's both the start and the ending that really make it good. I like the slow build up of the begining - which really puts you into the middle and the ending is very eloquently summed up.
You are a very good writer - I'll keep an eye out for your future work!
- Tim |
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