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Stress
Contributed by
ElizabethAnn
on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 06:57:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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To much stress
makes people weak
when people come up to you,
then problems start pileing up.
Your body becomes numb,
and you want to go into a
little dark room and die.
You want to scream,
and yell as loud as you can.
Stress can kill you and
make you weak.
But everyone is diffrent.
In my view stress is killing me.
I hate it so much,
and being a good friend,
doesn't help much.
cause everyone comes to me.
So now i have problems taller
than me.
My tears only fall beacuse I
care.
Copyright ©
ElizabethAnn
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2006-08-12 18:57:42]
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Re: Stress
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by RLWildPassions on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 07:42:45 PM AEST
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| very good write, when i am stressed, every one stays away lol.. |
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Re: Stress
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 01:28:18 AM AEST
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| I feel ya on the stress flow |
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Re: Stress
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 12:17:45 PM AEST
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| yeah stress causes a lot of problems, I agree..we all have our own and then we take on others and it compounds..es[pecially if there's nothing we can do..take deep breaths..excrcise too is good. Your poem was great. I could feel your stress. keep writing about it..that helps get it out. |
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Re: Stress
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by CaddishCut on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 01:30:01 PM AEST
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| I'm that type of person also, where everyone comes to you and you care too much to tell them you have enough of your own problems not to hear them. Great write! |
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Re: Stress
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by frmpoison2static on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 04:30:33 PM AEST
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| yeah i know what you mean, stress can make one weak and numb. |
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Re: Stress
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 06:39:22 PM AEST
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I like that last line. Gosh, I have felt that line, so many times.
I believe a person can beat stress. I know they can. You can, too.
You need to spell check before you post. Otherwise, good write,
Phil xxx |
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