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LEAVE A MESSAGE
Contributed by
blackholesun2006
on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 09:39:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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my phone is silent
but voicemail's on
you cannot reach me
for i am a long time gone
the lines been cut
so away i'll hide
and you will never hear
my voice break when i cried
you will never know
you'll never see
i'll keep my pain hidden
to save you from me
so i sit upon my rooftop
cast my phone aside
a deep breath
one footstep.........
I've died
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2006-08-12 09:39:19]
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Re: LEAVE A MESSAGE
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by chaos78 on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 11:58:39 AM AEST
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| wow i do like sad but good thank u 4 sharing |
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Re: LEAVE A MESSAGE
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by candysears on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 12:23:58 PM AEST
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Very sad but a very good read..Very good..
God Bless! |
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Re: LEAVE A MESSAGE
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by CaddishCut on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 01:05:50 PM AEST
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| Ya know this would make a good ending to a sad movie...I like! |
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Re: LEAVE A MESSAGE
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by surrealsenses on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 03:31:03 PM AEST
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| i like the way you write, and though i wouldnt call this sad...it is brutal with it's honesty. embracing every emotion from the majestic to the morbid is stellar. so send us some more raw recollections. |
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