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kool-aid sky
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 03:54:49 AM in AEST
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the world is spilling onto smudged sheet music
with a broken song symphony
as rythmic poetry clings
to a steady exhale of cigarette smoke
dreamin of finding the divinity
witnessed as the sky became cherry kool-aid
and being told if you work hard enough
you to can touch the riseing sun
and smile knowing its ok to pretend
recall the first time danceing in the rain?
with youthfull innocence
and blisfully unaware
happy in the understanding of your world
that is, before you relise you really dont understand at all
and lifes masterpiece
turns out to be a crude sketch in charcoal
insted of the van goh sunflowers
or rembrandt smiles
i remember reprive of such thouths in the shadow of an apple tree
as dragonfly's spread laughter among lavender
and a cat laments the birth of a nightengale
with the breeze to inhale wildflowers from my hair
and a melody of oceans waves to carry me away
then settle in the stillness of exhaustion
i wonder if its still possible to fall upward
into the time that fled forever
and once again.....
recall the days when the sky was made of cherry kool-aid
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Re: kool-aid sky
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by surrealsenses on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 04:17:06 AM AEST
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| beautiful! such descriptive language is magnetic...kool-aid will never be the same again. i love your use of personification and symbolism. |
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Re: kool-aid sky
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 04:29:29 AM AEST
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#1 u r very wise
2 this is incredibly written.
A masterpeice, I'd say.
huggs, kool aid,
emy |
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Re: kool-aid sky
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 01:44:03 PM AEST
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| wow i am impress |
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Re: kool-aid sky
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by candysears on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 02:57:30 PM AEST
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This is truly a beautiful piece here...Very nice read..With a soothing touch to it..
God Bless! |
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