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A tear
Contributed by
kims4ever
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Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 03:02:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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the sound of a tear, driven by greed, breaking the silence for all to see.
an emotion awakened, a soul set aside, something unfortuneate stirred from deep inside.
eating the mind subtracting the faith, so what is left?, the core at it's base.
many show emotion, break down and cry, over just the little things, or when someone dies.
This I can't do, sad it is yes. But the beauty in my words is enough to confess.
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kims4ever
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2006-08-12 03:02:35]
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Re: A tear
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by CaddishCut on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 01:08:29 PM AEST
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| Well there certainly was no struggle in writing this. This is awesome. I would vote this one a 10 if I could |
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Re: A tear
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by candysears on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 03:01:13 PM AEST
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This is an excellent piece of work..
God Bless! |
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