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He loves me not...
Contributed by
crazygirl
on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 09:23:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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as i sit,
questioning the certain accuracy of a simple flower petal,
looking for the only answer ill probally get,
i remember you,
and all i thought you'd be,
i remember the fights,
and how you hurt me,
but then i remember,
how your smile brighted my world,
and the mezmorizing sea of blue,
you call your eyes,
i realize how much i love you,
dreaming of the forever you promised,
glancing to the flower,
i stand corrected,
as i pluck the final petal,
i am left with the final realization,
that, he loves me not.....
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2006-08-11 21:23:32]
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Re: He loves me not...
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 04:47:43 AM AEST
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Luv it and know the feelings.
Great job.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: He loves me not...
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by CaddishCut on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 01:18:15 PM AEST
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| I love how you describe the thoughts behind an old doing. This is marvelous! |
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