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Wondering Eyes
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 09:14:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Who knows the thoughts of a child
these angels, unreconciled
to the new strange world that lies
outstretched to their wondering eyes?
Who knows if but a piteous fear,
too deep for a sobbing moan or tear
is beneath their breathless gaze
of such sudden wonders that amaze:
some fear from the dim unknown,
or shadow like black mist blown
across the Heavenly Ray
of this new-come dawning day?
But their smiles which are sudden and swift
break through all the shadowy rift
from what far beyond and near
is seen and unseen in this blissful sphere.
Billy
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Re: Wondering Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 10:09:41 PM AEST
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An amazingly beautiful piece .. and full of truths, beyond compare.
Each stanza breathes on it's own, but when nestled together, they
have an impact that holds an enlightenment that is truly compelling.
Inspiring, hun .. every word
xox
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Re: Wondering Eyes
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by shelby on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 11:38:11 PM AEST
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another beautiful write, yes if we could always keep the wonderment of a child, how peaceful things would be.
Michelle |
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Re: Wondering Eyes
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 12:29:49 AM AEST
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aww so true.
what a awsome write Billy
kids are the best of gods creation in my eyes.
hugs |
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Re: Wondering Eyes
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 05:00:18 AM AEST
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wow, my friend,
You've out done yourself in this beautifull, raw, materpeice.
You have incredible insight.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Wondering Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 10:17:56 AM AEST
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Emystar and I just called Spike a genius and a master of words for his write posted right after this one. It's not often two geniuses post one right after the other but, Billy, this was absolute genius in insights and word mastery. There's somethin' wrong in this world when you and Spike don't have half dozen or more books published! I'm in complete AWE!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Wondering Eyes
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 12:46:43 PM AEST
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It is perhaps one of the truest tragedies of life that we lose our sense of wonder as we grow. It is, though, one of the most wonderful blessings that we can rediscover it later. To experience it again after having lived without it for a while is, in my opinion, even more overwhelming and awe inducing than could possibly be imagined.
I love this. And selfishly, I love the reasons why it moves me so.
Thank you, Billy - for the reminder.
~Snemmy
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Re: Wondering Eyes
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by CaddishCut on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 01:15:28 PM AEST
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| So precious they are! This is beautiful |
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Re: Wondering Eyes
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by jerseysue on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 07:48:01 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem with lots of feeling. I f we could look at the world through a childs eyes, we would see a different world. Innocence in all its wonder, with no greed or selfishness. |
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Re: Wondering Eyes
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by wizard on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 11:02:35 AM AEST
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awesome post, bro...i love the flow..the first stanza is great.
wiz
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Re: Wondering Eyes
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 10:54:02 AM AEST
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Whether you knew it or not, and I suspect you did, you have managed to tap into a whole realm of psychological development in children (Melanie Klein thinking in particular). That aside, this write was marvelous and smart, for its innocence and for provoking thought.
Nice as always
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Re: Wondering Eyes
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by TwistedCage on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 12:38:47 AM AEST
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Aren't children great? Yeah, I enjoyed this one greatly. Very well done; the rhyme scheme was flawless, and your word choices fit the piece perfectly.
Great write,. |
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