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Pig
Contributed by
CaddishCut
on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 01:40:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I want to get inside your head
Check for activity
Have you pronounced me dead
Have you no clue what you did to me
Promises become lies
Guilty are your eyes
For tearing me up inside
For the times that I have cried
Shameful you should feel
You know this time it's real
I am forever gone
For you nomore is it that I long
I hope you rot away
Filth and scum's what you've become
Watch your being start to decay
For the first time I have won
Copyright ©
CaddishCut
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2006-08-11 01:40:39]
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Re: Pig
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 01:55:59 AM AEST
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I see someone had broken your heart
sorry to hear that.
and your write is sad and emotional.
Job well done
you get a 5 star from me |
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Re: Pig
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by ramatie on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 05:52:59 AM AEST
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| the first bit brot some sadness in me but i like the ending its like a loud cry of victory,good one. |
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Re: Pig
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by ham323 on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 10:25:00 AM AEST
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| o0o0o. If I had read this poem for every time I felt this way. Dayumm. Very good. Loved it. 5stars. :] |
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Re: Pig
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by snowflake on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 04:18:23 PM AEST
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love it i can relate to this just as you can relate to mine GREAT write
*SNOWflakee* |
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