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Bent
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 08:21:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Bent
inward and outward
my wrists have bled
have burned
and they call me the virgin suicide
Broken
at the core
my mind has been stapled
closed, shut down
and they strangle me with held back tears
Torn
down to my breaking point
my eyes have grown cold.
elusive touch,
You can never save me
Can you?
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2006-08-10 20:21:56]
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Re: Bent
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 08:47:18 PM AEST
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| awesome work......feelings expressed so clearly......keep it up......^_^" |
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Re: Bent
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by chaos78 on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 11:18:55 PM AEST
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| good write i lile thanks 4 sharing |
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Re: Bent
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by frmpoison2static on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 10:57:20 PM AEST
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| bent, broken and torn..very vivid write..keep it up. |
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