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Lead her to Heaven

Contributed by In_a_While on Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 11:06:04 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

The wind is here whipping
my skin's gonna break
Lashes upon lashes
i feel my mistake

I'm failing God failing
so return me to health
I've tasted the earth
now i crave for a hell

The dogs are still chasing
my soul through the yard
I'm lost in a storm
shaped like a heart

with mud on my shoes i hold her hand strong
and lead her to heavens where angels belong
"i'll see you some year when i feel the light well
til then, keep the clouds pretty and help them to swell"

back to my room
with a rose of no scent
decay is decline
from health and the rent

tar and a pillow
i sleep til i'm tired
i wake to no other
but her life that expired

dw

Copyright © In_a_While ... [ 2006-08-09 11:06:04]
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Re: Lead her to Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 07:05:47 AM AEST
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I really, really, really like this poem. The imagery you've used is flaming awesome! It's got such a good flow and rhythm to it, and it seems to stand alone, if you get me. Loved it!

2sdyx

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