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The Nightmare I Face Each Day Without You.
Contributed by
ravenrain
on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 06:41:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I awake everyday and hate the fact I did.
My body feels empty and my heart aches constantly.
I look around and see nothing but pain.
My love has been taken away from me so abruptly.
People walk around unaware of what awaits
for them around each dark and cold corner.
I never feared what awaited for me cause,
you were by myside making me stronger.
Together we were unstopable for kept
in sight the beautiful future to have.
Complaining of every situation that presents
a turning point, not willing to take action to
better themselves, or their life style of what
they want for them and the love ones around them.
Growing weaker and more sick of every
conversation I have with mindless
drowns that keep making the same mistakes
over and over, but make not attempt to change.
So I turn to you every night while I sleep,
hoping you do the same so we meet in our
dreams, asking you for more strenght to
live in a horrifying, delusional twisted world.
Where the sun light is quickly devoured by
The Devil Himself!
Copyright ©
ravenrain
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2006-08-09 06:41:56]
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Re: The Nightmare I Face Each Day Without You.
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by frmpoison2static on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 08:05:32 PM AEST
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~~~I awake everyday and hate the fact I did.
My body feels empty and my heart aches constantly.
I look around and see nothing but pain.~~
excellent poem, this first stanza really caught my attention...keep up the good work. |
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Re: The Nightmare I Face Each Day Without You.
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 10:35:40 PM AEST
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good write
take care |
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