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Sunshine or Dew
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 12:53:48 AM in AEST
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To the half-unfolded flower
With fragrance-laden heart:
"What is thy secret power
That doth thy petals part?
What gave thee all thy hue,
The sushine or the dew?
Your wonder-wakened soul!
As dawn steals 'way the night,
And you so soft, love hath stole
Thine eye that blooms with light;
What makes your charm so new,
The sunshine or the dew?"
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Re: Sunshine or Dew
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 01:49:26 AM AEST
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Short & sweet. I absolutely love this my dear friend. So little words can say so much. A beautifully ascribed poem. Perfect in every way. It's so good to see you writing much happier writes dearest Billy~ A big thanks to the person who inspired this. I'm happy for you and may love and happiness never depart ur beautiful heart ever again.
Take care my dear friend.
as always from ur fan/friend,
suzie Q |
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Re: Sunshine or Dew
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 01:59:55 AM AEST
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Very lovely Bill, picturesque and delicate.
well done.
Ben |
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Re: Sunshine or Dew
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by sprinter27 on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 12:00:40 PM AEST
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Nice write. Short, sweet, simple... yet a lot like something Shakespeare would write and usually I'm not fond of things that remind me of Shakespeare... but this was good. Excellent write. And those are great feelings to have... hold onto them and keep on writing!
~sprints |
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Re: Sunshine or Dew
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 05:30:25 PM AEST
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| Sunshine or the dew, Neither thy poet , tis you. This is a short , but sweet and beautiful read. I enjoyed it very much. Sue x |
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Re: Sunshine or Dew
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 06:38:34 PM AEST
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Wow .. jerseysue took the words right out of my mouth! lol Good call sue!
Billy ... such sweet and soft sentiments within this piece
doth lie .. I hardly have the wits about me to comment on
how it both moves and touches me.
And if I may be so bold .. it was neither sunshine nor
the dew, but only the purest love so true ..
XO
~Breezy
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Re: Sunshine or Dew
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by Spike on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 08:51:49 PM AEST
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Beautiful and arfully constructed. I'll go for the sunshine.
Spike |
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Re: Sunshine or Dew
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 07:44:04 PM AEST
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Beautiful in its simplicity... I love this, these two small stanzas say everything and that is the way things should be said, I believe.
I love your metaphor here, it's unique, and very clever.
Great write, my friend,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Sunshine or Dew
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by wizard on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 10:29:56 PM AEST
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great write bro...these are the types of poems i like best...i'm sure there is a particular name or style this falls under, but my amateur self is not sufficiently conversant to know what it is..lol..
at any rate, i love the flow and rhyme scheme...and the way they compliment the beautiful message therein.
the clarity of the message, coupled with the sheer brevity transforms this from a good poem into a great one.
i'm left in awe...
your bro,
wizid...(kid)
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Re: Sunshine or Dew
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 12:59:55 AM AEST
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Wow Billy
You must of found new love
what a wonderful piece of poetry.
You did great
Big hugs |
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